Violence
Darkness
Hard tug to the right
Voices
Whisper
Head down on the ground
Committed
Controlled
Say just what to say
Power
Ruthless
All came with a price
Favor
Discord
Push out all in mind
Muttering
Mumbling
Trace shapes in the sand
Obedience
Subservience
Tear out all my flesh
Scared
Crier
Weak beyond all doubt
Help
Harm
Can someone save me?
tara caribou | ©2020
Original poetry | Poem is me
Streams of Consciousness and Poetry
Portman's Ponderings, Procrastinations, Preambles, Prognoses & Parodies.
Either your life is art or it's a piece of work.
Poetry
Poet. Starscraper. Song whisperer. Niño de las estrellas.
Writen word and poetry
Author | Freelance Writer | Blogger
Writings of a mad man. Orson Welles once said: "He eats pizza!".
A New England Poet writes Poetry, Haiku, Fables & Criticism
teeny tall topics and tales, and occasionally diddly doodles
colouringchaos
Thoughts-poetry on life, nature and spiritual
Writer. Sci Fi. Art Nerd. D&D. Rum. Writing Portfolio and Blog. TWITTER: @tayrotten
If my stories doesn't arouse you, then I'm doing something wrong!
The tourniquet has failed...
Atmospheric Mind Flow
Writing Lostness
Fun for the whole asylum!
I love reading your poems/thoughts
LikeLiked by 2 people
I figured you would appreciate this one, T.
LikeLike
This one is full on… 🖤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hey! I’m so pleased you liked it. Just remembering some fucked up days of old.
LikeLike
I know that feeling…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Brutally Beautiful ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Jack. Proof there can be beauty from ashes.
LikeLike
I picture this spoken in a pulsing light.
‘Obedience, Subservience, Tear out all my flesh’ – states so familiar. A great contrition of words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for your thoughts on this, Mark. After reading it, I could picture that too.
LikeLiked by 1 person
The talented flow of the writing!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Superbly voiced in the one word lines echoing the paralyzing effects of loneliness that cause sufferers to withdraw. The poignantly evoked poem leads irrevocably to its conclusion on a skillfully versed piece
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for sharing!
LikeLike
You are most welcome ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person