Our Song

you are the soundtrack to my heart
music threading through the air
my fingers in your beard
yours playing at my throat
notes rising and echoing
my legs wrapped around you
your hand deftly strumming my soft cords
sighing as you slide inside me
our bodies moving together
weeping with emotion as
we play one another
composing the most beautiful song
a duet of you and me

tara caribou | ©2019

Read this and more in my poetry book, Four.

30 thoughts on “Our Song

  1. I love it when two people playing one another that way are compared to music or a musical instrument. It makes me long to do just that, play her like an instrument until she gently weeps. Beautiful imagery, my dear.

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  2. This is far more romantic, far more sensual and far deeper emotionally than it first meets the eye. I love that, I love that it makes you do a double-take, catch the more intimate sides, but then blossom from that, emerge, almost as if bursting from a cocoon. So if it’s sex, it’s there. If it’s love, it’s there. Intimacy, connection, small details, devils in those, YES I LOVED IT TO BITS, ALRIGHT? I’LL MARRY IT IF I WANT TO!

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    1. I now pronounce you Spiral and Song. May you live your days together in happiness. 💕
      Haha! I’m so glad you like this. I was very particular on the wording and I did in fact weave magic into it while I crafted it. You’re welcome.


      1. You’re welcome. For some dudes out there though, I’d have to call FEMA. 😄 Anyway it looks like you already initiated a hard-on containment protocol with having another blog. Necessary or not, I can’t judge.

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        1. Hahaha! I totally don’t mind people being turned on. I rather think it’s a good thing. But I wanted to switch gears a bit with this, my main blog. Honestly; I haven’t had any horrible people. Everyone has been very nice to me (with the exception of one blogger who blatantly plagiarized my work and then showed surprise in the comments that someone would actually do that). 🤷🏼‍♀️ I’ve found the WordPress community quite amazing.

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  3. Love it. Tara for some reason I am unable to ‘like’ or even comment before signing in. also I no longer receive an email when you post. I know you had some trouble a while back with the site. Is there something I need to do ?

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