Eyes wide
Peer deep within
Hands on the red rims
Reach forward
All in head-first
Dive into those blue pools
Crystal clear
She’s laid out before you
Completely
Perfectly
Vulnerable
Ripe
Spread out
Ready
Reach out and caress her heart
It’s there for you
Beating out a rhythm of longing
Love
And desire
Press your fingers in
Spread her wide open
Push yourself deeper
Deeper
Until you’re fully inside of her
Slip into her heart
Warm
Wet
Inviting
Stroke her innermost parts
Feel her walls
Tight and firm
Write your name there
As she cries out your name
Wrap yourself further
Don’t pull away
Rest in her
As she cradles you
There within her pulsating warmth
©️tara caribou – 2018
I like how the eroticism and longing intertwine here. Absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you Chela! I always appreciate your comments.
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A really fascinating experience. I like it.
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Thank you John! Diving in never felt better.
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Like to try sometime.
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Yeah, I’m just assuming here…
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I love how the fewer the words, the greater the description. You leave the detail for the readers mind x
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Haha! Thanks for the nice compliment. Exactly my intention.
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Very clever, I always appreciate writing that makes my mind pay attention.
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Thanks Sheri. I’m so glad you liked it.
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This is what I’m talking about: a perfectly meshed hybrid between eroticism and emotion. It’s far from just erotic or just emotional – it’s that sweet spot that melds the two. The back-and-forth switching between these two centers. the push-pull creates a wonderful, scent-rich (if that makes sense) read.
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Yes. That does make sense and thank you so very much for your insight and kind words. It means a lot to me.
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An exquisitely well-balanced, passionate, sharply descriptive poetic verse of erotica. Beautifully executed, Tara!
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Oh thank you so very much, that means the world to me.
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I love the intimacy and eros, deftly sprinkled throughout.
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Thanks Rob. I really appreciate that.
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Love the feeling and emotions behind this, the image of being held, while nestled in her warmth. Divine.
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Thanks AC. It was a vivid scene in my mind. I’m glad I could take you there with me.
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